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van hikari
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:02 am | |
| Carmy: that's not funny! *suddenly her fingers can't grip her pens | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:08 am | |
| *Carmy is in tears*
Carmy: S...Stop laughing at me!
*She goes to get out of the office, getting stuck in the exit door as she does so* | |
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van hikari
Admin
Posts : 89004
Join date : 2013-03-15
Age : 28
Location : ReynardCity
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:10 am | |
| Carmy: make it stop! *sly appears in front of her | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:13 am | |
| *Sly helps Carmy through the door*
Sly: Hi Carmelita or should I say...CARMALOTTA!
*He bursts out laughing*
Carmy: Sly, how could you?
Sly: Boy you really let yourself go didn't you?
Carmy: Stop it!
Sly: You know Supersize isn't a challenge, right?
Carmy: I SAID STOP IT! | |
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van hikari
Admin
Posts : 89004
Join date : 2013-03-15
Age : 28
Location : ReynardCity
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:15 am | |
| Sly: welp. feeding time about now. | |
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AKGirl
Admin
Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:17 am | |
| *Sly's gang arrives with truckloads of food*
Sly: Just a little snack before dinner! | |
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van hikari
Admin
Posts : 89004
Join date : 2013-03-15
Age : 28
Location : ReynardCity
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:18 am | |
| Carmy: no sto-MPH! *begins getting stuffed* | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:21 am | |
| *As Carmy eats a crowd forms, TV crews etc all arrive*
Carmy (thought): This...this is crazy! | |
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van hikari
Admin
Posts : 89004
Join date : 2013-03-15
Age : 28
Location : ReynardCity
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:22 am | |
| *she fills the doorway more and more* | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:32 am | |
| *Sly laughs*
Sly: This is hilarious- the woman who kept trying to stop me is going to end up the world's
fattest woman! | |
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van hikari
Admin
Posts : 89004
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Age : 28
Location : ReynardCity
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:34 am | |
| Carmy: stop! *Falls through the wall as the door explodes off her | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
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Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:48 am | |
| * A circus ringmaster appears*
Ringmaster: Sweetie we're going to make you a star! | |
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van hikari
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Posts : 89004
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:50 am | |
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AKGirl
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:51 am | |
| *Suddenly she's in a big top trapped in a giant cage* | |
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van hikari
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:53 am | |
| Carmy: i..can't...handle... | |
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AKGirl
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:56 am | |
| *Carmy is in tears*
Carmy (thought): W...Where is Carmalaga? Why isn't she helping me?
*She looks across and sees her in the cage, also enormously fat*
Carmalaga: Me you. Like you me also fat. | |
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van hikari
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Posts : 89004
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Age : 28
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 9:58 am | |
| Carmy: i...i cant make it stop....i'm just a useless blob | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
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Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:06 am | |
| *Carmy is in tears*
Carmy: Trapped in a useless body... nothing more than a massive joke...
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van hikari
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Posts : 89004
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:08 am | |
| Platinum: just a little more. | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:11 am | |
| *Perfect Platinum appears next to Carmy*
PP: I think you've seen enough haven't you?
*Carmy nods*
PP: Now I think it's time for another vision...
*Carmy looks down to see her body has become muscular*
Carmy: W...What is this?
PP: This is you...with the power you deserve. | |
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van hikari
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Posts : 89004
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Age : 28
Location : ReynardCity
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:11 am | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:29 am | |
| *Carmy grins as suddenly she is casually taking down villains*
Carmy: This... this feels amazing!
PP: Of course it does...you can take control in the way you've always wanted to! | |
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van hikari
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Posts : 89004
Join date : 2013-03-15
Age : 28
Location : ReynardCity
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:31 am | |
| Platinum: so which is it? this? or- *the world melts back to the circus tent* this? | |
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AKGirl
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Posts : 99600
Join date : 2013-03-19
Location : Reynard City
| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:33 am | |
| *Carmy thinks about this*
Carmy (thought): I...I know this is a dream. But the weight gain...it was so real...
I could feel myself getting bigger and bigger.
*She then looks at PP*
Carmy (thought): But then...I know what she has done in the past...I can't let her take over.
But then...I'm not Sal... | |
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van hikari
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Posts : 89004
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| | Subject: Re: Perfect Platinum's Revenge Mon Nov 16, 2015 10:35 am | |
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